Get ready for three new Lightning Reviews!
This time, we have two mystery/thrillers with vastly different grades. It’s mainly why I decided to group them together. Plus, a contemporary romance novella with unconventional occupations.
She Lies in Wait
author: Gytha Lodge
She Lies in Wait by Gytha Lodge is the first book in a new British procedural series, and I think it will be a great match for fans of Tana French.
In 1983, seven teenage friends go camping, and the youngest among them, Aurora Jackson, disappears in the middle of the night. At the time, Jonah Sheens is a young police officer. Jump forward thirty-five years, and Jonah is a Detective Chief Inspector when Aurora’s remains are finally found in the forest. Jonah and his team, including newbie Juliette Hanson, are responsible for the case. They quickly track down the six remaining friends believing one of them has to be involved, and it’s clear each among them is keeping secrets.
I found myself really engaged in this novel, and for a debut mystery I thought the pacing and plot execution was excellent. The mystery is revealed in snippets from Aurora’s perspective in 1983, and then from the investigation team’s point of view in the present day. Even though we’re being introduced to Jonah’s team for the first time, there isn’t a lot of info-dump, and the characters are revealed to us through showing and not telling.
Probably the only thing I questioned is who lets a group of 14, 15 and 16-year-olds go camping in the middle of the forest alone with zero supervision? I guess the eighties were a different time. And I do want to warn readers that there are violent scenes in this book, and that it does contain a graphic rape scene.
I really want the next book in this series, and I’m super bummed out that I probably have to wait a year or more for it.
– Elyse
Mystery/Thriller
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Tripped Out
author: Lorelei James
This is a contemporary romance novella between a glasses-wearing scientist hero and a heroine who co-founded a marijuana dispensary and grow house. The unconventional occupation of the heroine and the fact the hero wears glasses are the two main reasons why I picked this one up.
The romance is really cute, as the hero and heroine start out having a playfully antagonistic relationship at work. It’s really the novella format that sells everything short. I struggled with whether I found the romance and plot satisfactorily balanced with a believable resolution.
The novella packs in a lot of detail on how a dispensary is run, the science behind cultivating different strains, and the process of making things like oils, edibles, and the like. While these things are interesting and fascinating from a nerdy standpoint, it overwhelmed a lot of the story. The sheer amount of detail of this career niche also eclipsed the hero and heroine in a way that made it seem that marijuana was central to both of their characters.
Could this have been solved with more pages? Maybe. I don’t know. I know I wouldn’t want to read 200+ more pages of the intricacies of pot science, but it would have spread out those details a bit more in favor of addressing the romance on a deeper level. It was still a fun read with a fascinating couple, but superfluous details drowned out any emotional arcs.
– Amanda
Contemporary Romance, Novella, Romance
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The Witch Elm
author: Tana French
I’m a fan of Tana French’s Dublin Murder Squad books, so I was excited to see she was releasing a standalone mystery. To my disappointment, The Witch Elm has a great premise, but shaky execution.
The book opens with our narrator, Toby, going home after a night out with the lads. Toby is described as one of those guys who manages to navigate the stickiest of situations without suffering any consequences–case in point, he’s recently massively screwed up at work, and he’s probably going to walk away without so much as a reprimand. Toby goes back to his flat and wakes up from a half-drunk slumber to catch a burglary in progress. He tries to stop the intruders and suffers a terrible blow to the head in the process.
The next section of the book has Toby recovering from his traumatic brain injury while helping care for his uncle Hugo who is dying of cancer. Toby suffers from memory loss, among other things, as does Hugo, who has a brain tumor. During a family get-together, one of Toby’s nephews discovers a human skull under a witch elm in Hugo’s garden; a skull police link to a boy who went missing when he was in high school with Toby.
I love an unreliable narrator, and Toby is it. Either he, or Hugo, could reasonably have committed the murder and would be incapable of remembering it. Much of the book is Toby’s growing sense of unease as he struggles to recall his past.
The problem is, The Witch Elm takes forever to get going, and even then struggles to find it’s pace. We don’t get the skull-under-the-tree bit until almost a third of the way into the book. Much of the narrative is spent exploring Toby’s friends and family, and dissecting his past as a mediocre dude who succeeded in life due to his gender, economic status, and race. It feels like a book that isn’t quite sure what it wants to be. When I got to the end of the mystery, it wasn’t satisfying. I felt like clues to the resolution hadn’t really been seeded throughout the plot.
I loved the premise of The Witch Elm, but the slow pacing and the amount of time Toby spends navel gazing kept me from fully enjoying the mystery.
– Elyse
Mystery/Thriller
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Aurora and Jonah are highly unlikely names for British characters born in the 1960s!
I hope Tana French isn’t entering her “I’m so popular, I can write a doorstop of a book and no editor in the world will ever ask me to pare it down” phase. I’ve gradually given up on Elizabeth George (among others) in part because of the bloated nature of her books. I’m not saying everything has to be a streamlined 150 pages setup-murder-investigation-denouement ala a 1960s paperback, but it would be nice to have mysteries of a reasonable length that do not involve a 50-page life history of every character of even minor importance.
I wholeheartedly agree with your take on The Witch Elm. It was a slog. I’m looking forward to She Lies in Wait and might have to move it up on my TBR list.
@Elyse, yes, I guess it was a different time. We went camping all the time without parental supervision in the 70’s.
Does Tripped Out address at all the ludicrous amount of black people in jail for marijuana-related offenses? Because I’m feeling really icky about the premise of the book . I realize it’s legal in Denver, but we all know there are people who get to sell and enjoy pot without consequences and people who don’t…
@Suleikha: Nope, not even once, if my memory serves me correctly.
@DiscoDollyDeb – I have also gradually given up on Elizabeth George. She changed editors several books ago, and there was a noticeable decline in the tightness of the plot and pacing issues.
I have the same issues with Diana Gabaldon. I gave up on the Outlander series several books ago when it took me a month to slog through one, and I wasn’t working at the time!
These are a few of the authors that people will keep reading because of the author’s name, therefore publishers will keep on publishing…
@Elyse I mean, at summer camp, four 17 year olds are the adult supervision for 10 or more middle schoolers and 14 year olds do solo hikes.
Wait. This might be why my summer camp isn’t certified by the American Camping Association.
I HATED the Witch Elm. I know it’s primarily the romance genre that requires we like our protagonists, but I think it’s important to be able to relate to them on some level in other genres as well. But Toby? No, thank you. There was almost nothing whatsoever in his nature that earned him the benefit of the doubt, either early in the novel or at the far-too-slowly prolonged reveal. When I finally finished, I wanted the lost hours of my life back and have sworn I will never be tempted by another positive Tana French review. I was so-so with her first two books and then got put off by her third, but this will most definitely be my last!!
Gytha Lodge! That’s the best Terry Pratchettesque author name I’ve ever heard. I wonder if it’s a pen name?
@Tam, I thought the same thing. How can it not be a pen name! Though it would be a fabulous real name.
I liked THE WITCH ELM well enough. If only because I can get lost in French’s writing. But it was definitely a C+ read for me.