Book Review

Ayesha at Last by Uzma Jalaluddin

Now THIS is how it’s done! Ayesha At Last is a lovely loose retelling of Pride and Prejudice, with a perfect mix of humor, heartbreak, misunderstandings, and humor. It’s a contemporary set in Canada and the characters are described with empathy and with plenty of surprises. Upon somber reflection it has some flaws, but the reason the flaws are so glaring is that most of the book is so perfect.

The Darcy of the book is Khalid, a Muslim man who works in IT. He lives with his mom and expects her to arrange a marriage for him. He wears robes, has a long beard, and avoids shaking women’s hands. However, he is respectful and appreciative of his female coworkers, including Clara, the company’s empathetic Human Resources manager. Khalid meets Clara’s friend Ayesha at a lounge (“Not a bar!” his friends insist, despite the presence of alcohol, which makes Khalid very uncomfortable). He immediately assumes that Ayesha is “the type of Muslim who frequents bars” and she assumes that he is a “judgmental, sexist jerk.”

Ayesha lives with her widowed mom and her grandparents. Ayesha longs to be a poet but has just started her first year of teaching as a substitute in high school. She wears a hijab, is serious and responsible, and determined to avoid arranged marriage. Ayesha serves as an older sister to her younger cousin, Hafsa, a spoiled young woman who is interested in money, the color pink, and boys.

When Khalid and Ayesha meet, he immediately jumps to conclusions about her, she is immediately offended and jumps to conclusions about him, and sparks ensue. The hijinks increase when Hafsa begs Ayesha to fill in for her at a committee at the local mosque. The committee is trying to put together a youth conference and, surprise, Khalid is also involved. This throws the two together long enough to argue, exchange ideas, and get to know each other better.

As every romantic couple should, they help each other grow as people and (eventually) are supportive and mutually respectful of each other. The storyline is based on misunderstandings, yet there’s a sense that these two people can actually communicate just fine when they aren’t busy making assumptions or using false names like Ayesha does, since she has to keep being her cousin Hasfa in the committee. I love how Khalid and Ayesha deny liking each other but also won’t shut up about each other when talking to friends – a true sign of interest.

Early on, we meet a group of women who are developing a line of plus-size lingerie. These women are my everything. Their appearance signals an unlikely alliance and a deeply satisfying moment. I deeply regret that this group of women are not in every scene of the book as they were a delight and I would have loved to see more of them.

With the exception of the rather one-dimensional antagonists (Khalid’s Islamophobic new boss, Tarek-the charming guy who’s supposed to be helping with the conference, and Khalid’s controlling mom), the characters are all layered and interesting, and their problems are resolved in surprising and satisfying ways. One of the greatest joys of this group were the resolutions, large and small, all of which were grounded in character and explored that individual from unexpected angles. There’s also a lot of humor in the book.

I’m giving this book a B+ for the following reasons:

  1. The mistaken identity plot device was an unnecessary complication.
  2. The villains were one-dimensional.
  3. While I delighted in Clara’s solution to her own relationship problem, I do not see romantic happiness in her future, which makes me sad. I believe she wasted a clever solution on a guy who wasn’t worth the effort.
  4. I was irritated by some of Ayesha’s feelings about teaching. While her struggles were realistic, her comment that she feels belittled by “absent teachers who took delight in leaving work their students would hate,” angered me. I was raised in a family of teachers and I know how much they struggle to leave solid lesson plans behind when they are sick. I’ve seen many teachers stagger through a work day because coming up with a substitute-worthy set of lessons plans is more exhausting than coming to class. It’s an unfair crack at teachers and doesn’t match the tone of the rest of the book.

These flaws were more obvious to me because everything else was so perfect – the tonal balance between serious content and humorous, the layered characters, the high level of empathy, and of course the representation. Many people in the story make assumptions about both Khalid and Ayesha based on their appearances. This is especially true of Khalid, who has a very conservative manner of dress and strict rules governing his behavior. However, as the characters are challenged to examine their assumptions, the reader is challenged as well. This author is an auto-buy for me from now on.

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Ayesha at Last by Uzma Jalaluddin

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  1. MILLY says:

    I loved this book when it came out here last year. So happy to see it got an international release.

  2. TN says:

    Thank you for bringing this book to light. Like so many I am a sucker for P&P adaptations.

  3. DonnaMarie says:

    Thank you Carrie. This is an excellent review. I generally pass on Austen reworkings, but you have intrigued my interest.

  4. Emily C says:

    I have been looking forward to this book for a few weeks now!! I can’t wait to read it. I am on the wait list at my library for this and Unmarriageable by Soniah Kamal, because while I don’t need another contemporary YA retelling of P&P I am interested in a new cultural perspective of a classic story.

  5. Amanda says:

    I LOVED this book, which I was lucky enough to read a couple of months ago. I also agree that it’s a “loose” retelling (or adaptation) of P&P, something that works in its favor, IMO. (I’m used to retellings trying to be more scene-for-scene or character-for-character.)

  6. Lisa F says:

    Right around where I would rank it as well. Beautiful book but those villains desperately needed beefing up as people.

  7. Lisa says:

    I really hated this book and DNF’d. I was really looking forward to it, as I love P&P re-dos, but I immediately did not like Khalid and how passive he was. I also found the super-racist new boss to be 1-dimensional and her plot to be too obvious. I was really disappointed in this one.

    However, I also read Unmarriageable, a P&P set in Pakistan that was so fantastic. I loved it. It is probably the best P&P retelling I have ever read. So if you liked Ayesha, I’d check out Unmarriagable.

  8. Katie says:

    As a former sub turned full time teacher myself, I’m glad you brought that up. There are plenty of real complaints subs could make (for example, subbing is lonely work, even if you frequently sub for the same building, most colleagues will not reach out, whether it’s because you go unnoticed or they can’t be bothered). I would never give a sub something my kids would hate doing! That would only cause kids to act out, and I’d have more work to do when I got back disciplining them!

  9. Hanna says:

    I find this review to be divorced from the reality that Muslim individuals go through every day.

    You’re not understanding the reality that Ayesha was protecting her cousin and admitting that her cousin didn’t want to help the mosque would have reflected badly on all of them. Including Ayesha who was deceitful shame and guilt are something that is hyper realized in the South Asian and Muslim community.

    You may find the villain over the top or one dimensional but BELIEVE me it isn’t. CAIR is currently suing a business for workplace discrimination because a Muslim woman wanted to pray during work taking un paid time to do so. It’s hard getting a job as practicing Muslim and it’s always hard to keep that job when you get a new boss as well. As for the villain of jealousy among family members you don’t understand the tight knit and political natures of South Asian families and it shows.

    Clare chose the man for her and she’s willing to give him a chance to earn her that’s literally what she’s trying to do give her a break!

    And really you chose to downgrade a book because a woman who doesn’t have the personal calling to teaching doesn’t like it! That’s a horrible standard to judge on lol. As a teacher I DO give assignments that are engaging but ultimately have no worth in the grade book for my subs because it’s no fair to grade my students on fluency drills that isn’t part of their unit.

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